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Summer 2002 Poetry Competition First Prize

Wishful Thinking

by Gill Baconnier

Email: gill.baconnier@laposte.net

 

If I were you, I’d buy me flowers

And gaze into my eyes for hours,

Or take me out to Alton Towers-

That’s what I’d do, if I were you.

 

If I were you, I’d book a plane

To Paris, where we’d drink champagne 

While slowly cruising down the Seine.

If I were you, that’s what I’d do.

 

I’d write a book, if I were you,

And pen an article or two

To tell the world our love is true.

I think you should, I know I would.

 

I’d sketch my face in every space-

On envelopes, old shopping lists,

The pages of New Scientist-

I’d make a great Impressionist…

 

But

You are you. You’ll never be

A man who writes me poetry,

Or serenades me on one knee -

 

You mend my bike, unblock the sink,

And let me paint the kitchen pink,

You gave up smoking, gave up drink –

 

And that’s the way things ought to be:

You being you, and me, just me,

Loving each other

Differently.

©2002 Gill Baconnier

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