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Autumn 2009 JBWB Poetry Competition Third Prize

Our Neighbours and Us

by Jenny Bain

thejennybain@btinternet.com

 

They had an immaculate lawn

and mowed it every Sunday.

We had a muddy football patch.

And daisies.

 

They had a neat new Nissan;

also immaculate.

We had a blowzy blue Allegro,

which wasn’t.

 

They had a fancy cocktail cabinet

with twinkly lights.

We had a battered book case,

and beer cans.

 

They had a three-piece suite with

scatter cushions.

We had squashy armchairs

with saggy springs.

 

Their kids played out in

white safari suits.

Ours wore hand-me-down jeans

with holes in.

 

They didn’t have a dog.

We did.

It ate their rabbit.

 

They were very glad

when we moved.

So were we.

 

©2009 Jenny Bain

 

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